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Response 1: In any paper, the introductory paragraph is very important as it can grasp the reader's attention towards the paper. In this paper, the style can be improved by first discussing what accreditation actually is and then its importance in health care. However, in terms of clarity and readability the paper should first discuss the role of “centers of disease control and prevention” then it should move towards statistics and other studies about the advantages and disadvantages of accreditation in health care.

Response 2: The paper possess coherency as, on the whole, it describes the necessity of accreditation in the health care system and other fields like educational institutes, etc. The case studies discussed also help in understanding the necessity of the evaluation process. For instance, the comparison between accredited and non-accredited labs shows the importance of accreditation to improve the quality of overall health care system.

Response 3 26/7/2019clear but certain paragraphs do not progress from the former ones like in second paragraph author discussed case study while in the third he shifts from case study to general information and then again in the fourth paragraph he shifted to a case study. Generally, it is recommended to first explain the issue and discuss its merits and demerits and then proceed to case study but this paper lacks this technique.

Response 4: This paper relies on both evidence and intuition as in the second last paragraph where the author described the role of accreditation in his particular field he used a case study in which accredited labs and non-accredited labs were compared to show that accredited labs helped a lot in improving the quality and patient care.

The author could have mentioned more about how the evaluation method could help in his particular field by giving real-life examples relating to his field of work or study rather than just using case studies.

Response 5: The whole paper was about the role of accreditation in the health care system so in the second last paragraph there was no need to mention the use of accreditation in schools and colleges. The author could have given more examples of different departments within the hospital where accreditation can be used to improve quality.

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