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For a piece of writing it is essential that it should be clear and concise. Clarity and conciseness is an integral part because it maintains the interest of the readers ADDIN ZOTERO_ITEM CSL_CITATION {"citationID":"MGwfu7AS","properties":{"formattedCitation":"(Gerson, 2015)","plainCitation":"(Gerson, 2015)","noteIndex":0},"citationItems":[{"id":176,"uris":["http://zotero.org/users/local/Tqq4tlqy/items/PBHVQV9R"],"uri":["http://zotero.org/users/local/Tqq4tlqy/items/PBHVQV9R"],"itemData":{"id":176,"type":"article-journal","title":"Writing That Works","container-title":"A Teacher’s Guide to Technical Writing","author":[{"family":"Gerson","given":"Steven M."}],"issued":{"date-parts":[["2015"]]}}}],"schema":"https://github.com/citation-style-language/schema/raw/master/csl-citation.json"} (Gerson, 2015). In addition to this, a brief paper saves time and attracts the reader. Similarly, clarity in the paper through the use of simple vocabulary and constant flow of idea also makes the writing compelling ADDIN ZOTERO_ITEM CSL_CITATION {"citationID":"TwJLl4ee","properties":{"formattedCitation":"(Harris, 2016)","plainCitation":"(Harris, 2016)","noteIndex":0},"citationItems":[{"id":178,"uris":["http://zotero.org/users/local/Tqq4tlqy/items/IIU5N288"],"uri":["http://zotero.org/users/local/Tqq4tlqy/items/IIU5N288"],"itemData":{"id":178,"type":"book","title":"Writing with clarity and style: A guide to rhetorical devices for contemporary writers","publisher":"Routledge","ISBN":"1-351-96860-2","author":[{"family":"Harris","given":"Robert A."}],"issued":{"date-parts":[["2016"]]}}}],"schema":"https://github.com/citation-style-language/schema/raw/master/csl-citation.json"} (Harris, 2016). With this though under consideration, the struggle I had with clarity in the past was that it was challenging for me to explain different ideas in flow and connection to one another. Secondly, to make my writing attractive, I preferred using decorative vocabulary which hindered the clarity of the thoughts. Correspondingly the struggle I had in the past with conciseness was that it was difficult for me to decide which information is irrelevant and how ideas can be explained using fewer words. These struggles were because of my weakness with clarity and conciseness. Another flaw in my writing skill is unfocused topic sentences which makes my writing lengthy ADDIN ZOTERO_ITEM CSL_CITATION {"citationID":"eQFJuajm","properties":{"formattedCitation":"(Ferrari, 2015)","plainCitation":"(Ferrari, 2015)","noteIndex":0},"citationItems":[{"id":181,"uris":["http://zotero.org/users/local/Tqq4tlqy/items/8QDSB8LA"],"uri":["http://zotero.org/users/local/Tqq4tlqy/items/8QDSB8LA"],"itemData":{"id":181,"type":"article-journal","title":"Writing narrative style literature reviews","container-title":"Medical Writing","page":"230-235","volume":"24","issue":"4","author":[{"family":"Ferrari","given":"Rossella"}],"issued":{"date-parts":[["2015"]]}}}],"schema":"https://github.com/citation-style-language/schema/raw/master/csl-citation.json"} (Ferrari, 2015). However, I feel that creativity is my fundamental writing strength. With these strengths and weakness under consideration, the thing I can do to make my work effective is to use simple vocabulary and sentences ADDIN ZOTERO_ITEM CSL_CITATION {"citationID":"1bRU3PSz","properties":{"formattedCitation":"(Clark & Sousa, 2018)","plainCitation":"(Clark & Sousa, 2018)","noteIndex":0},"citationItems":[{"id":183,"uris":["http://zotero.org/users/local/Tqq4tlqy/items/9JHFHWVN"],"uri":["http://zotero.org/users/local/Tqq4tlqy/items/9JHFHWVN"],"itemData":{"id":183,"type":"book","title":"How to be a happy academic: A guide to being effective in research, writing and teaching","publisher":"Sage","ISBN":"1-5264-4907-2","author":[{"family":"Clark","given":"Alexander"},{"family":"Sousa","given":"Bailey"}],"issued":{"date-parts":[["2018"]]}}}],"schema":"https://github.com/citation-style-language/schema/raw/master/csl-citation.json"} (Clark & Sousa, 2018). And to create a link among sentences.

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Diversity at the workplace is the most important aspect of the organization. Diversity at the workplace performs tasks at different factors such as economic, cultural and social.

As economic growth and demographic growth in the US region grows, organizations increasingly think about whether their workforce reflects the diversity of the society they serve.

As stakeholders in the health sector, we must be able to work with regard to the huge range of languages, religions, customs, traditions, worldviews and values, especially as more and more patients in our region actively make decisions regarding their health.

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In an organization, diversity is an important aspect. It aids in the performance of different tasks in different sectors like Economic, social and cultural.

The economic and demographic growth in the US region, force the organization to ponder upon the workforce that reflects the diversity of the society they serve.

As a stakeholder in the health sector, it is essential to work in different areas like languages, religions, customs, traditions, and worldviews and values because patients are participating more in decision making regarding their health.

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ADDIN ZOTERO_BIBL {"uncited":[],"omitted":[],"custom":[]} CSL_BIBLIOGRAPHY Clark, A., & Sousa, B. (2018). How to be a happy academic: A guide to being effective in research, writing and teaching. Sage.

Ferrari, R. (2015). Writing narrative style literature reviews. Medical Writing, 24(4), 230–235.

Gerson, S. M. (2015). Writing That Works. A Teacher’s Guide to Technical Writing.

Harris, R. A. (2016). Writing with clarity and style: A guide to rhetorical devices for contemporary writers. Routledge.