Response To Patrice

Response to Patrice

[Name of the Writer]

[Name of the Institution]

The post is well organized and clear. Paragraphs are well-knitted through coherence of ideas and cohesive through cohesive devices. The language is simple and understandable to the people of any field. As the writer has not used jargons and technical terms. The writer has described some basic health-related issues and backed them with researchers' views. The writer firmly believes that issues related to old age are natural and normal. He tries to present the positive side of this phase of life and wants to convince his reader that though old age carries some issues however these issues can be managed. The post is organized thematically, the various thematic patterns join together information and references around a theme. The whole post is divided into five paragraphs

In Paragraph 1 the writer introduces the topic under discussion along with the writer's point of view. He stresses the point that disabilities and healthiness do coexist, and does not mean that the person is sick and he has to feel sad and hopeless. Paragraph 2 provides the writer's opinion about the relationship of age, health, and chronic illness. And provides the positive and negative aspects of it along with how these can be managed. (Chatterji, et.al, 2015) Paragraph 3 provides some basic facts about chronic pain along with its causes and outcomes. Here the writer argues that age is not the ultimate cause of chronic pain. He mentions the various causes of chronic pain. He mentions some responsibilities of patients whose irresponsible behavior worsen their health conditions (Lynn & Adamson, 2015)Paragraph 4 describes the psychological and cognitive effects of aging and talks gives some suggestions to the old individuals as well as those who encounter them (Moll, O'Brien, Solomon, & Vajravelu, 2016). Paragraph 5 summarized the post with a description of episodic disabilities along with its effects and the effect of a positive attitude. He gives a few references to strengthen his argument. In a nutshell, the writer has developed an excellent post.

References

Chatterji, S., Byles, J., Cutler, D., Seeman, T., & Verdes, E. (2015). Health, functioning, and disability in older adults—present status and future implications. The lancet, 385(9967), 563-575.

Lynn, J., & Adamson, D. M. (2003). Living well at the end of life. Adapting health care to serious chronic illness in old age. RAND CORP SANTA MONICA CA.

Moll, S., O'Brien, K. K., Solomon, P., & Vajravelu, S. (2016). The impact of the episodic nature of chronic illness: a comparison of bromyalgia, multiple sclerosis and human immunodeciency virus. Edorium J Disabil Rehabi, (2), 53–65. doi:10.5348/D05- 2016-11-RA-7